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[Madness Vengeance]

Quite good

But there are some points you should improve on.

First of all, the name. It's called "Madness Vengence" is your submission's name, you spell it like "Madness Vengance" in your movie, but the correct spelling would be "Madness Vengeance". I don't want to sound like a dick, but come on, it ís the main title and I think that at least that one should be spelled correctly.

Second of all, your drawing style. You colored everything nicely, and drew all your sprites and stuff yourself, which I think is good. But I personally believe that it would have looked better with some thicker lines, but that could just be me.
Also, it looked like you had been a bit lazy with drawing hands, since your characters almost always had the three fingered hand no matter what they were doing. Even if they were holding a rifle they held it with two the same hands at the same side of the rifle, which looked pretty weird.
I wonder why you positioned the glasses above the horizontal eyeline from the crossface, but considering people don't have to put their sunglasses in front of their eyes all the time , it doesn't matter that much.
To end with the negative stuff I should say that most of your guns didn't look too realistic as well. So I would recommend that you draw them from example next time.

I still think it's a good movie though, the storyline, interrogation scene and the triple camera shots, so don't forget about that.
I'm just saying it could have been better.
But I definately hope to see more from you in the future ;D

DrClay responds:

Thanks for the heads up. Its weird though because I remember spell checking that and everything, and nothing said it was wrong.. I guess its another one of those words..

for some reason, I wanted each outline to only be 2 pixels wide, something about it looked nice to me. Like I wanted it to stand out or something.

I actually thought that is how the animation for the series was done, always having the same look on the hands, unless an original action happens (surrendering and such) then the hands would switch to a full palm. just saying...

I didn't really pay attention to the + on the faces, I stuck the glasses where I would see the eyes if I drew them.

[Madness One]

Yeah

That was awesome man. I really enjoyed it. Now we'll wait for Madness Two ;)

GabrielBarsch responds:

maybe, it´s a good idea but i dunno a music called two

[MZM 69 2]

Whahaha

Seriously... that was bad. And wrong. And yet so good and funny. I laughed my ass off, and it's animated well, so here a well deserved 10 for you XÞ

nggangsterpimp responds:

:333333

[Hank PWNS]

Ehm...

I hope you made this the way you did on purpose, because it actually wasn't too good at all.
The way he entered the building was very unrealistic, you got lazy with the feet animations of the enemies, you could at least have cut out the gun properly and put Hank's hand on it, and the blood looked quite weird with the gradient fill colors and thick lines.
Work on all of that next time, and I'll vote higer if I see it.

Orangebeef responds:

It's supposed to be bad but at least it features 100% MY art and not Krinkels! Oh Wait Lolz

[Madness Combat Short]

Not so much animation

But it was very very funny. Though I recommend you put some more animations in it next time... It makes it a bit less boring to watch. If you know what I mean.
10 for random funnyness!

Crazymonkey154 responds:

yes I think I do know what you mean. well, I do admit that humor WAS my goal when I made this for Leap Day 2008 (yes, it IS true that I started AND finished on the same day I submitted this, amazingly), lol. glad you still liked it, though!

[Madness Joker]

Madness is like gravity...

...all it takes is a little push :D

adollfo responds:

haha...I love that phrase...thanks for the score n review!

[A Christmas Stick Short]

lol

it was nicely animated, you obviously made more frames for this stick fight than most people do.
still it was on the pretty short side, although it's called "A Christmas Stick SHORT".
so my hint: make it longer, but it's sure you can animate.

TOXlCITY responds:

Thanks!

[Madness: Sniper's Rain]

pretty short

but animated well. happy new year to you as well :D

nggangsterpimp responds:

you to man. :D