RazorShader's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Madness Heist]

Fuck yea

This was nice.
A bit slow at the start, but I guess it was necessary in order to make it a real story. The action scenes were pretty well animated and the story was well set up.
Great voice actors too.

[Crazy Clown]

Lol

Pretty simple, very short, but very funny as well :D

[Dusk of the Madness]

Truely your best one this far :D

It was fantastic, like you said in your author comments already you decided to ake this one less colorful than the second one, and I think you made a great choice.

I really like how you still managed to come up with original new ideas like the guy with the mustache alerting all zombies because of his hunger for pie, and the fact you made the zombies themselves more unique giving them hats and stuff.

It's a shame most of the main characters died, but the story to their deaths was epic. Less action than the other two, but you emphasized the story more and it came out really well.

5/5 & 10/10

[Xiao Xiao No. 3]

I've seen this one so many times

...and it never gets old.
Great action, new and original moves, great Matrix-style kick in the end.

I don't like how the character proportions change all the time, though.

5/5and 10/10

[Madness Combat 5.5]

Woohoo

Cool music, cool characters and cool movie :D
I like it a lot; it's a nearly seamless filling the gap between MC 5 and MC 6.
I really loved to see them working together and it was seriously worth the waiting.
Yet I think it's a little short, but that isn't necessarily a bad thing.
Can't wait to see the next one :D

10/10 and 5/5 of course

[Madness Vengeance]

Quite good

But there are some points you should improve on.

First of all, the name. It's called "Madness Vengence" is your submission's name, you spell it like "Madness Vengance" in your movie, but the correct spelling would be "Madness Vengeance". I don't want to sound like a dick, but come on, it ís the main title and I think that at least that one should be spelled correctly.

Second of all, your drawing style. You colored everything nicely, and drew all your sprites and stuff yourself, which I think is good. But I personally believe that it would have looked better with some thicker lines, but that could just be me.
Also, it looked like you had been a bit lazy with drawing hands, since your characters almost always had the three fingered hand no matter what they were doing. Even if they were holding a rifle they held it with two the same hands at the same side of the rifle, which looked pretty weird.
I wonder why you positioned the glasses above the horizontal eyeline from the crossface, but considering people don't have to put their sunglasses in front of their eyes all the time , it doesn't matter that much.
To end with the negative stuff I should say that most of your guns didn't look too realistic as well. So I would recommend that you draw them from example next time.

I still think it's a good movie though, the storyline, interrogation scene and the triple camera shots, so don't forget about that.
I'm just saying it could have been better.
But I definately hope to see more from you in the future ;D

DrClay responds:

Thanks for the heads up. Its weird though because I remember spell checking that and everything, and nothing said it was wrong.. I guess its another one of those words..

for some reason, I wanted each outline to only be 2 pixels wide, something about it looked nice to me. Like I wanted it to stand out or something.

I actually thought that is how the animation for the series was done, always having the same look on the hands, unless an original action happens (surrendering and such) then the hands would switch to a full palm. just saying...

I didn't really pay attention to the + on the faces, I stuck the glasses where I would see the eyes if I drew them.

[Uni Madness]

Movement...

...is the main thingy you're going to have to improve. But besides that you had a funny protagonist and a quite unexpected plot twist.
I like it :D