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[Creature of night part 2]

Better than part 1...

...but to be honest, it still needs improvement.
It's quite on the short side, and maybe you should consider waiting untill you post part 3, untill you have more than this. Put it all together later, and I'm pretty sure the reviews will be better.
Also, you told me in my review on part 1 there should me much more deaths, but in fact I actually saw just one.

Just improve your skills, keep getting better and better, make the shots less static and make more story.
Because now you have just 2 random short scenes.

If i might give you another hint; in the first shot of this one, you see some explosions and a running creature.
You have drawn some hills as well, but i suggest you let them move slowly to the right, to make it look like the creature is actually getting away from the place he is standing at.
Loop that movement, and also make sure the explosions don't hit the same place over and over and over again.
I should do the same with the fighter, but with clouds for suggesting movement. Also let it go a bit up and down.

@ FavouriteBear: Read the 'guidelines for posting reviews', section F.
I can understand you don't agree with someone else's reviews, but you are actually not allowed to say that in one of yours. And IF you feel to do so, make sure it's not filling up your whole review, because the only thing you've actually reviewed now, is the review of nukyew2.

Little-Red-Bear responds:

Thanks friend! But please you can annoy nukyew2, but be friends with Favorite bear he is cool!

[Madness Dissolution]

lol

this definately deserves a place higher in the MD09 list!
i hope there will be a sequel........

[Creature of night part 1]

short indeed

and in fact, not much happened. but i think this is more an attempt to show a bit of those creatures, rather than making a big story already.
you could have showed the nightcreature ripping up the guy a little bit more, and put some more story in it.

Little-Red-Bear responds:

Yes your right this is like the trailer I'll tell you know there will be alot more deaths in part 2.

[bear hunters]

lol

it was funny; i dont know, but just bears shooting eachother is quite funny already. i pretty liked it, although i dont get the end with the fat guy.
but its good for a 2nd sub :)

Little-Red-Bear responds:

Thanks!

[Salad Fingers Episode 8]

i still dont get it...

...but at least this episode explains why Hubert Cumberdale tastes like "soot and poo" like he said before XD

[Salad Fingers Episode 6]

wow.. strange

OK.... I don't get it.... First he eats Jeremy Fisher, gets outside, gets back, becomes Jeremy Fisher, gets eaten again.... but because the second time he was Jeremy Fisher he eats himself.....?
Anyway, veeeeery creepy, the way those puppets moved by themself, or just in Salad Fingers' thoughts.....

[Salad Fingers Episode 5]

I think he likes spoons too

Really cool. But the most scary part was, at least in my opinion, the fact that Marjory Stewart-Baxter showed up behind the window by herself, while 'Mr.Fingers' was outside the house.
I like the way Salad Fingers got freaked out by just those words of the girl; he must have lived alone pretty long, talking to himself and his imaginary friends only.

[Salad Fingers Episode 4]

hehe

Salad Fingers pwned the child XD
I don't understand why everyone pitties that creepy kid that much. I feel more sorry for Bordois.
I like these movies very much, I hope part 9 will be out soon. Anyway, keep up the good work! :)

@ majoraboy: What you mean "doesn't have any friends"? Did you forget about Marjory Stewart-Baxter, Hubert Cumberdale and Jeremy Fisher?

[Salad Fingers Episode 2]

Creepy, weird, but cool as well...

Kinda creepy, letting the guy in the oven and getting him locked up.
I was really like "whoa!" when Hubert Cumberdale opened his mouth suddenly and started screaming.
By the way I lolled when he told his friends they "arrived earlier than I expected".

[Madness: Extermination]

lol

the voices were weird and i didn't copy most of what they said, but it made me leugh very much (especially the stupid matrix effect at the end). it was good for a laugh, and the animations werent bad actually, so 9/10