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[Creature of night part 2]

Better than part 1...

...but to be honest, it still needs improvement.
It's quite on the short side, and maybe you should consider waiting untill you post part 3, untill you have more than this. Put it all together later, and I'm pretty sure the reviews will be better.
Also, you told me in my review on part 1 there should me much more deaths, but in fact I actually saw just one.

Just improve your skills, keep getting better and better, make the shots less static and make more story.
Because now you have just 2 random short scenes.

If i might give you another hint; in the first shot of this one, you see some explosions and a running creature.
You have drawn some hills as well, but i suggest you let them move slowly to the right, to make it look like the creature is actually getting away from the place he is standing at.
Loop that movement, and also make sure the explosions don't hit the same place over and over and over again.
I should do the same with the fighter, but with clouds for suggesting movement. Also let it go a bit up and down.

@ FavouriteBear: Read the 'guidelines for posting reviews', section F.
I can understand you don't agree with someone else's reviews, but you are actually not allowed to say that in one of yours. And IF you feel to do so, make sure it's not filling up your whole review, because the only thing you've actually reviewed now, is the review of nukyew2.

Little-Red-Bear responds:

Thanks friend! But please you can annoy nukyew2, but be friends with Favorite bear he is cool!

[Creature of night part 1]

short indeed

and in fact, not much happened. but i think this is more an attempt to show a bit of those creatures, rather than making a big story already.
you could have showed the nightcreature ripping up the guy a little bit more, and put some more story in it.

Little-Red-Bear responds:

Yes your right this is like the trailer I'll tell you know there will be alot more deaths in part 2.

[bear hunters]

lol

it was funny; i dont know, but just bears shooting eachother is quite funny already. i pretty liked it, although i dont get the end with the fat guy.
but its good for a 2nd sub :)

Little-Red-Bear responds:

Thanks!

[Salad Fingers Karaoke]

yay

yeah i liked it. the best salad fingers tribute ive seen so far!

MiddleFingerRings responds:

falad bingers.

[Super Mega Madness Mayhem]

it was funny

but the animation was a bit crappy.
besides, the only thing you see is a guy getting shot and pissed at.
if this "TOOK YOU MANY NIGHTS TO CREATE THIS" you better could have picked some sleep.
next time you should make it a bit longer, more events and overall more frames.

HolyPeanuts responds:

Pffff, your momma needs mo' frames, BITCH!

[A Totally Random Day]

Pretty funny

But if I might give you a hint:
Most of the time there was a disturbingly long pause between the movements, which were, when they started, a bit too fast.
It went a bit like:
...nothing... nothing... QUICK... nothing... nothing... QUICK...
If you know what I mean.

Crazymonkey154 responds:

hmm..... too fast and too many pauses, huh? sorry about that. still glad you liked this!

[Madness Ownage]

too short

and not very funny at all

nggangsterpimp responds:

it is short.

[Madness: Juxtaposition]

they walked a bit odd

and the overall movement was a bit slow, but i liked the way you remade the madness characters

CrispyBrain responds:

The odd walking was mostly a result of that I had to resize the movie. Watch the uncut version I posed on DA (it's in my author's comments) and see if you like that more.

Yes, this was slower than a usual madness movie for sure, but I'm happy you liked the character models all the same! :) Thank you for your review.

[- Wierd Chicken Madness -]

pretty funny

but what i dont like, you made a decision menu where not realy is the possibility to choose.

L3pra responds:

that was the point

[madness is to mad for us!]

i hate short movies

unless they are so funny as this one.
i like your style. keep up the good work!

oldlyshapedchris responds:

thanks