RazorShader's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Room Madness]

not very bad for a first sub

but not very good either. the animations were quite choppy, and the feet didn't move when the guys were walking.
the guys in the second room didn't even have feet.
later the feet indeed moved, but the movement speed wasn't even close to being synchronised with the movement speed of the entire character.
so you really have to improve in the animation smoothness and speed.

randomno12 responds:

thanks i will improve but you have to agree little red bear sucks

[The Lonely Castle Crasher]

lol

funny story, unexpected end.
nicely animated and good voices.

LAVAGASM responds:

Thanks.

[Off the Chains 3]

a bit short

and the explosions weren't animated and draw very good.
but i liked the experimental prisoner's shineyness and the soldiers running.
the audio was also pretty good (especially the radio-taling), but the animations weren't good enough for a higher vote.

Flashmovieboy responds:

Thanks anyway! I just have to develop myself...

[Yoshi's Flutter Jump Comp]

lol

pretty funny and nicely animated.
i dont get why they were running over clouds though.
and in my opinion you should let them continue their running while they were talking.
so 8/10 and 4/5

Bomber109 responds:

The "running" is called flutter jumping. It's a move Yoshi performs to sustain his height.

Try Yoshi's Island and you'll see.

Anyway, I agree. Actually, that would make animating that scene 8 times easier, so, I might as well.

[Madness short part 1]

you need better sprites

not the parts you have drawn yourself, but like I said on your account page, get some standard sprites in better quality, or draw the entire character yourself.
this is just too pixelated.
but the submission itself was pretty funny.

Little-Red-Bear responds:

Ha, I know they were so pixelated.

[Madness Resurrection T]

looks good

i like your style, also that Dante character.
i hope you will finish and post it soon, although i would understand it as well if you would post only on MD 2009 :D

i know that, when its released, its good. but for the stuff you show us in the preview.... i give you a 7.
i know the idea of a preview is just to show some stuff, but i will vote for it like i see just some stuff. some fancy looking stuff, still :)

and might i add the suggestion you say in your author comments its not Hank but Dante, because without his name showing up somewhere, its a bit confusing.

Vel0x responds:

I haven't just shown as u said that it's not Hank and it's Dante, cuzz I haven't tought about it. But I'll show them somehow I think but Tnx man XD

[Madness Gossip]

couldnt hear what they were saying

but it wuz quite funny :)

nggangsterpimp responds:

thnx dude. :D

[Bear Jail]

haha

feel the misery of... ThE bEaAaRs
when will this come out for real?

FavouriteBear responds:

I'm working on a movie about a bear running from the law....
perhaps Bear Jail could be a prequel???

Thanks for the vote.

[Bears on the run!]

LOL

random... but funny as well.

Little-Red-Bear responds:

thanks

[Creature of night part 2]

Better than part 1...

...but to be honest, it still needs improvement.
It's quite on the short side, and maybe you should consider waiting untill you post part 3, untill you have more than this. Put it all together later, and I'm pretty sure the reviews will be better.
Also, you told me in my review on part 1 there should me much more deaths, but in fact I actually saw just one.

Just improve your skills, keep getting better and better, make the shots less static and make more story.
Because now you have just 2 random short scenes.

If i might give you another hint; in the first shot of this one, you see some explosions and a running creature.
You have drawn some hills as well, but i suggest you let them move slowly to the right, to make it look like the creature is actually getting away from the place he is standing at.
Loop that movement, and also make sure the explosions don't hit the same place over and over and over again.
I should do the same with the fighter, but with clouds for suggesting movement. Also let it go a bit up and down.

@ FavouriteBear: Read the 'guidelines for posting reviews', section F.
I can understand you don't agree with someone else's reviews, but you are actually not allowed to say that in one of yours. And IF you feel to do so, make sure it's not filling up your whole review, because the only thing you've actually reviewed now, is the review of nukyew2.

Little-Red-Bear responds:

Thanks friend! But please you can annoy nukyew2, but be friends with Favorite bear he is cool!