Hmm
Seems to me that you just took a part from the MC10-track and mashed it up a bit. And not even really well in my opinion; parts like 0:16 and 1:15 lack smooth transitions, leading to an overall messy edited reult.
Cheshyre's music is great, but I'll give this just 1 star based on your additional input. I don't see any reason to give you extra credit for the tune itself since you didn't make it.